Yay! "Harmonies" is another spectacular creation from the great `CookiemagiK!
First and foremost, "Harmonies" is a straightforward choice for the title, it sets up the viewer's focus on the actual piece very nicely. The whole concept of "Harmonies" sums up the "harmony" (literally speaking) of incorporating melodies and emotes together into one idea of pure splendor. The result came out really beautiful.
I love what you did on the emotes. Their expression show happiness and of course, their cuteness is oh-so epic! In addition, you did great work in synchronizing all the animated parts into a slick animation, and making the timing of the bounces incredibly smooth and glitch-free. And using the colors of the rainbow (or is it?) - plus the crimson and some shades of blue and green - for the sequence of the different notes that come out is very creative, and is really pleasing to the eyes as it gives beautiful contrast to the flow of the notes.
On the other hand, I do feel that you could have put more fresh creativity on the purple emote's wings - something new. I could have given it a straight 5 on the originality if the wing concept didn't remind me of your Redbull glomp emote... oh I screw my memory. And then - oh, the notes - as I was studying their sequence, my first take at it was that the trajectories of the notes are very irregular - some of them jump with high arcing paths, while others have low ones. (Gosh, my eyes are probably playing tricks on me right now ) Anyway I'll just leave it that, so whether it was intended that the notes jump randomly like that (or they really aren't), I'll say this has one of the most mind-boggling yet amazing animations I've seen.
Overall, you did... *cough* Major thumbs up! That's probably the end of my critique as I seem to have run out of words (wait.. I have 360 words, eh? ) to exclaim how exquisite and wonderful this is.
I love how the purple one hits the notes on the green one. It looks cute and makes it funny at the same time. I like the colors that you did on it and I the originality. I don't know what made you come up with this, but the impact of something so stunning is amazing....(although you could have done better, but I'm not complaining). The sparkly things look like fireworks and then it falls...which is a little weird but it adds more to it so it isn't so bland. The wings however, are a little too simple, but I love 'em anyways. Thanks for the awesome deviantart. Much appreciated.
First and foremost, "Harmonies" is a straightforward choice for the title, it sets up the viewer's focus on the actual piece very nicely. The whole concept of "Harmonies" sums up the "harmony" (literally speaking) of incorporating melodies and emotes together into one idea of pure splendor. The result came out really beautiful.
I love what you did on the emotes. Their expression show happiness and of course, their cuteness is oh-so epic!
On the other hand, I do feel that you could have put more fresh creativity on the purple emote's wings - something new. I could have given it a straight 5 on the originality if the wing concept didn't remind me of your Redbull glomp emote... oh I screw my memory. And then - oh, the notes - as I was studying their sequence, my first take at it was that the trajectories of the notes are very irregular - some of them jump with high arcing paths, while others have low ones. (Gosh, my eyes are probably playing tricks on me right now
Overall, you did... *cough*
Cheers Joel! Keep up the awesomeness!
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Regards,
***Kira***
I like the colors that you did on it and I
I don't know what made you come up with this, but the impact of something so stunning is amazing....(although you could have done better, but I'm not complaining).
The sparkly things look like fireworks and then it falls...which is a little weird but it adds more to it so it isn't so bland. The wings however, are a little too simple, but I love 'em anyways.
Thanks for the awesome deviantart.
Much appreciated.
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